^_^ ~Goodbye~ I don’t want to be apart of this game
Don’t kid yourself, it can never be the same
You left me high and dry
But I no longer have to cry
As soon as I think I’m over you
You’re coming back for more
The memories resurface
It was you that I adored
If you want me, fight for me
That’s all I have to say
Before you, it was easier
To go and face the day
Am I making it that easy
To walk in and out of my life
I don’t want any part of it
I’m just trying to survive
Don’t tell me that you care
Unless you really mean it
I’m not going anywhere
And I know I’m not perfect
“Like me/Love me” all you want
It doesn’t matter anymore
You had your chance and blew it
Now watch me close and lock the door. So…what do ya guys think???
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wow i really like it...it speaks deep emotion i do like it
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i like it because it really reminds me of my own experiences, great job connecting to your readers
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wow, thanks! ^.^ I'm glad you guys like it!
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i really like it! its so...wow
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Thank you! ;)
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it reminds me so much of the moment when i broke it off with my exgf, god that was great - is this from a recent experience, or from the past
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Oh, It's fairly recent. It has to do with my ex. He's a really great guy and I still love him but he just doesn't take relationships seriously. I know he loved me too, at least for a while... He's hard to understand. Basically in this poem I'm telling him to step it up and fight for me if he wants me and if not then to stop sticking around. It's almost as if he's weighing his options with others girls. I hate that and don't wanna be apart of it. sorry, I'm sure you didn't want the whole story, lol ^_^
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na its ok it sounds like my ex too she does the same thing but ive already said no which is sad cause now she wont talk to me but hey its her choice
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wow...that was soooo deep!!!
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haha no thats ok. for me itd be like my gf would act like shes just infatuated with me then for some reason just act cold for 2 week periods, then when i'd say maybe we should break it off shed all of a sudden love me again. and after three times of me taking her back i finally broke it off and was free, and it was grand
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gamingking0583- yea, it is her choice. that is a shame if you want to talk to her. I'd rather not talk to my ex just so i can get over him. he avoided me for a long time and I thought I was over him but then he started calling me again so...yea, it really sucks, lol patty_stalker1- thank you very much! ^.^ Unearthlycrowba- I can totally relate to that. I'm glad you finally feel free, :) That must have been hell to go through.
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i think the poem is greta but i wish i'd never read it...brings up feelings i wish i didn't have to feel...
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yes but letting out those feelings really helps sometimes just think of happy thoughts and it will all be ok
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lol no it won't because i feel these feelings about a situation i'm in now..i feel like dirt because i did something that i don't think i can fix and it's killing me
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well you want to talk about it...if you do you can post here of if you really want you can have my aim and we can talk about it there
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i already posted my problem..its under the love tag
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I'm sorry that my poem brought up those feelings for you. But gamingking is right, it is better to let those feelings out. this is definetly the website to go to if you are looking for advise or some help. Even if we can't help, we're all here to offer comfort to let you know you're not alone. I'm also here if you wanna talk about it. I hope everything works out for you in the end.
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finally...she's talking to me again...
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very nice..deep..emotional..i love it
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Pretty powerful
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Thank you very much! oh god...- I'm glad she's finally talking to you again. I wish you the best of luck!
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hmm..don't she doesn't want to be friens with me anymore..lol in the morning she did afternoon she doesn't...i give up...still your good at this poem writing
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I have a M.F.A from Colombia University to my credentials so that should spike all arguements that aren't made in my favor after this post. Its corny, Its cliched, and just because you say its poetry, doesn't make it poetry. your just one of a million hormone driven teenagers writing about petty little 'relationships' they had. Trust me, theres a million other useless poems out there like this. I'm sorry to be blunt, but you should stick to what you know.
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Well I'm sorry if the stuff I write, among with what other 'hormone driven teenagers' write doesn't live up to your 'standards.' Thanks for the "constructive critism" but maybe you should have kept it to yourself. You sound like someone who's too insensitive to view anything with an open heart. Honestly, I don't give a flying @&%$ if you have a M.F.A. from Colombia University. For all I care, you can shove your M.F.A. up your A.S.S. And I don't care if that's a typical teenager response. I'll continue writing MY POETRY about MY PETTY LITTLE RELATIONSHIPS so why don't you stick to what you SHOULD know--- If you're going to critize someone's work, don't be an a$$ about it and act like you're better than everyone else--- 'cause you're not. (Sorry if that's news to you) Have a nice freakin' day! ^_^'